After this peer review, I am ready to revise. I am going to go back to my writing, and reread my essay. I am going to read through my peers notes and fix what they commented. I am going to try to make sure that my essay flows and is understandable. After I correct my peers comments, I will go back through my essay and leave more comments. I also need to add more multimodal elements into my essay so I will try to do so. I think that my essay is on the right track, I just need to edit it well. After I have made all the changes to my essay that I think it needs, I will send a copy of my essay to my mom, so she can read and edit it. At this time, I don’t see any challenges. I need to take time to edit my essay and make sure that I am focused. I think that my goals are achievable. I am ready to make edits to my essay and feel confident that I will be able to change my essay and make it stronger.